Tuesday, October 13, 2015

unraveled

never mind 

it is beyond repair

but it can never be said that I didn't try

string by string

thread by thread

fiber by fiber

i  tried

it finally just broke

and i began to fall

good thing i have a parachute ~

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( simple words written on a sunny October morning when I realized the light will continue to shine and I would not crash  to the ground this time around )




Lia~  10/13/2015









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8 comments:

  1. RustyOctober 13, 2015 at 7:48 AM

    Always hedge your bets ... ;-)

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  2. d'PhilipOctober 13, 2015 at 8:45 AM

    that was the perfect thing for me to read too! Very nice I liked it alot, even the font was groovy cool! Have yourself a wonderful day!

    You'll notice I'm commenting here on the blog and not just placing and leaving a comment there on G+ too!

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    1. Lia StormOctober 13, 2015 at 1:24 PM

      I did notice that Philip :-) I think everyone is confused about what I meant about commenting on G+ . I was talking about the drive by plusses that people leave without ever reading the blogs. Either way, I know You always read even when you dn't comment. I'm glad you liked this little piece. It is me, working through and up and away from something I can't do anything about .

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  3. dana everhartOctober 13, 2015 at 6:05 PM

    we all fall, but getting back up is the key...my brain is only about half it seems...and they say we will be at this till mid Dec....

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    1. Lia StormOctober 13, 2015 at 6:37 PM

      Oh but I have a parachute now so I will have a soft landing :-)

      I know you must be worn out . Hugs

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  4. shadows of nightfallOctober 19, 2015 at 4:24 PM

    I missed this one. Great stuff. Love your poems Lia. (-:

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    1. Lia StormOctober 19, 2015 at 5:48 PM

      I'm glad you always come by to read them Greg , thank you :-)

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